A ßeautiful ƒąult
ƒault born(e) on two broken wings,
Defective from the very beginning.
A set of words, a [h o l l o w] string;
What graceful, pointless songs we §ing.
No one hears because no one will listen,
Too focused on the perfect vision.
A |u|n|i|q|u|e| life, a waste of time?
In what horrid, disgusting world am I?
What good is a life made so colourful
When the world passes by and ignores it all?
What good is one who can take a §tand
But can never gain the upper hand?
Bloody battles fought and lost hopelessly;
How can we go on with this travesty…?
A ßeautiful ƒ a u l t born(e) on two broken wings,
My existence was shattered from the start, don’t cry;
Just ignore like the masses, become a perfect doll;
Live a dream of fakery and lies.
While I,
My own ‘til I die, fade
s l o w l y
a w a y ~
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Note: I'm not particularly brilliant at poems -- nor very skilled at writing the structure of it -- favouring novel-style writing over lyrics and so on, but I do rather like this piece. The theme was supposed to be "imperfection" but I feel I strayed slightly; still, I do like what it ended up as. :)
=Ace
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Ace, this is great! Very cool how you use text formatting to add to your meaning. Do you mind if I use some of your lines as tweets? I'm trying to get more people to join by using facebook and twitter.
Bryan Falla 296 days ago