It’s more painful than ever now,
When you come to mind,
Your eyes ice cold as you left,
Did you ever regret leaving me?
Those meaningless words were forgotten.
The tears I shed are for you,
And always for you,
Not from the pain you caused me,
But from the pain I caused you.
Those painful words were forgotten.
I’ve always regretted not listening,
And I swear that I’m sorry,
I can’t live without you,
But I hope you can live without me.
Those agonizing words were forgotten.
I deserve the pain that dwells within,
And I will not hesitate, I will accept my fate,
As long as you are happy,
I will stand my ground and pay my dept.
‘I will always love you.’
Your words were never forgotten.
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Last updated 315 days ago by Angharad
Thanks a lot! I wrote it from my friends point of view tho, it's never happened to me :P I was actually quite hard to think of the words that meant more painful each time :L This poem took me quite a while actually i don't normally spend much time on my poems :L it normally just all comes out :P
Angharad 314 days ago
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I like this poem because I can empathise, it sounds familiar to me and a situation that I was in not long ago. I like how the adjectives describing the words get exaggerated after every stanza. Lovely poem :)
Lewis Donaghy 314 days ago